After
evaluating the beneficial session of our focus group. I instantly began responding
to the feedback given, covering concerns regarding the website, however I felt something
big was missing from completing the website. For instance, when I reviewed more
websites for motivational inspiration, we all startled upon MØ’s, Charlie XCX , Sia and Lorde’s websites and realised a logo played a big part in their products as
well as simplicity. Therefore, as a group we decided creating a logo could be
beneficial for the website. From the focus group feedback, I made the bold and
brave decision of completely starting from scratch as I felt this was the most
effective method. For instance, as I wanted to achieve the youthful, bright,
rebellious concept of our artist, I felt the template I had previously followed
and used was limiting my choices and creative freedom and therefore I wanted to
start again.
Similarly,
from observing similar websites, I understand simplicity travels along way. Therefore,
as a group we made the confidential choice of following a simplistic, clear theme
but weaving creative concepts within. For instance, notably analysing MØ's
website, we appreciate the basic use of layout as it is clear, creative and
well structured, giving off appropriate and correct messages and concepts. I
also recognise the homepage of the website needs to be the main focal point as
it will determine whether viewers want to explore links within it or not. Also,
broadly speaking, all the inspired websites follow a visual and clear style.
For instance, the artist’s websites maintain a simple homepage and then present
links which one can travel down after. Therefore, I will constructively and
confidently begin to create my own, again using the software Wix. Consequently,
the focus group gave me a big beneficial change in my direction and ideas.
After
researching and thoroughly preparing ourselves for the focus group, we finally
completed it on Friday. The focus group lasted for an effective and compacted
20 minutes, allowing us to cover all our concerns and queries and gain feedback
regarding our products. During this time, I took charge of filming the focus
group as I wanted to make sure everything was caught clearly on footage and be
responsible for providing the responsive source to evaluate. Similarly, Fran
also took crucial and important notes throughout and lastly Rosie kindly gave
up her time to generously and clearly present our focus group. The focus group
fell to a beneficial time of gathered opinions, suggestions and constructive concerns
about our three products as we ploughed through our prepared questions, however
further automatic questions were raised.
Regarding the Digipak:
Questions to be considered:
What
artists do you think it is similar to?
Is
there anything you dislike or would change about the design?
What
genre do you think the artist is?
Our focus
group felt the Digipak presented similarity between Lorde, Ariana Grande and
minimalistic relations between Taylor Swift. The
group prominently and confidently explained they were not fond of the snakes
used on the back of the digipak as they didn’t understand out they fitted
within the artist. Similarly, one member of the focus group, explained he felt
the digipak looked similar to a catalogue, such as a Prada collection, and
therefore he felt the choice of font needed to be altered.
Members of the group, struggled to answer this question, however,
many thought the genre was indie/ pop. Although, some stated they thought it
could alternatively cover the genre of a sad singer/songwriter, highlighting a gloomy
or depressing tone within. Similar to this, others felt rap music could
possibly be heard from the viewing the album cover.
The focus group also felt the digipak showed attitudes of a
bad girl highlighting the high fashioned vibe. However, on the other hand, many
members were not fond of the snakes included as they felt it was of confusion
and miss communication until they understood the explanation of the name ‘SIOUX’
meaning little snakes, and was therefore appreciated after.
Regarding the Website:
Questions to be considered:
Is it easy to
navigate?
Is there
anything you think is missing?
From looking at
the website, what words would you use to describe the image of this artist?
Several
members of the group felt the website was of high end and ‘exclusive’ and were
also hugely fond of the colour scheme chosen. They appreciate the clear,
structured layout and therefore felt it was easy to navigate and understand.
Beneficially,
the group didn’t feel there was anything missing, however, one member felt
there was possibly too many images, making the website subtlety repetitive and
therefore suggested showing a better range. Similar to this, the group felt
some of the images, such as the piano didn’t match or link with the style and
attitude of the digipak. Therefore, they felt the website connoted ideas
similar to singer/songwriter Adele, covering aspects of soul and therefore
possibly maintaining a too clean and structured look, in comparison to the bad
girl attitudes from the digipak. Similar to this, the group also felt a
potential change of image on the shop as they wanted a more equality of gender
within the shop, however, everyone appreciated the designs of the merchandised
items.
The focus group
picked up upon words of soul and clean cut and therefore felt the website
should be less pop like and more edgy. Some members of the group also felt the
website would work better with the colour scheme of white and green, however
others appreciated the unique design. Therefore, from this, we understand the
focus group felt the website was more refined and highlighted a professional
soul singer, however other products, such as the video were more fun, so
possibly consider altering this.
Regarding the Video:
Questions to be considered:
Are there any parts of the video you dislike?
We explained to our focus group,
we could not shoot anymore footage and therefore the feedback on the video was
limited as to how we could improve it. However, considering the editing, they
felt showing more of the spray painting would be effective.
Regarding the Digipak and Website: Questions to be considered:
Having watched
the video, do you think the website and digipak give off the same vibe?
What are your
thoughts on the colours used on the website and digipak?
If you could
only change one thing about the website or digipak, what would it be and why?
The group felt the
digipak differs from the website and music video through the use of colour and
mood. Similar to this, the
group collectively noticed the digipak and website seemed to be darker then the
video and therefore the lighting of the ancillary products could be considered.
Due to the element of the spray paint being so dominant in the video, members
felt spray painted images intertwining within the website or digipak would add
further elements of attitude and provide a more effective link through the
products.Therefore,
they suggested the digipak needs to be brighter and possibly add or take away
the green; or experiment with the layout and place one of the images amongst a
white, or spray painted background. Similarly, the group felt it was of efficiency
to subtract the images of the piano on the website.
Concluding the focus group feedback:
Overall,
I felt the focus group was of huge fortunate success as we gained responsive
feedback on how to make our products better. Broadly speaking, the opinions raised
were both positive and negative, however we mostly appreciate the negative
comments as it allows us to measure space for improvements. Concluding the
focus group, members were very fond of each product on their own and found easy
positives within them individually, however when evaluating and opinionating the
products as a whole, they struggled to see how they effectively linked together
to form a collective force. Therefore, as a group, we understand this is a huge
factor we need to consider.
Due to
this, moving on from the focus group, we are going to progress and finish our
products but constantly considering the opinions and comments made. For instance,
we will beneficially alter the digipak and website in order to achieve a link
and a distinct similar attitude across all three products. In order to achieve
this, we will go back to subtle basics, remembering who are artist is and what
qualities are important, such as her youth, rebellion and her cool chilled
elements.
Therefore,
as a group, we have prominently made the decision of adding more colour to the
digipak and adjust the correct of light, possibly making the product lighter
and more fun. Similar to this, we will consider subtracting our concept of the
snakes. From making these decisions, our digipak will hopefully become more
youthful and fall correctly into our style or star image. On the other hand, we
agreed we are going to make the website more visually interesting and fun,
therefore removing most of the text to make it less formal. Similarly, to the
digipak, we will also make the website more youthful and fun to link with our other
products. Lastly, I understand the importance of getting the correct target audience
for a focus group as it provides accurate, realistic views and therefore that
is what we gained.
As I am working and focusing specifically on creating the
website for our artist, SIOUX, I am constantly and consistently working on it every
day to attempt to improve it and make it as successful as possible.
As we are working as a team and each doing our bit to
achieve the best results, my group and I always organise a group discussion regarding
our products and to make sure we are all stirring in the right direction. I think
coming together as a group at times is very important and hugely beneficial as
we all gain suggestions in which we had not thought of before and also gain
either positive or negative opinions regarding our creations. It also helps us
to gather our products together and discuss the similarities and differences
between them as we are all aware we aim to allow our products to come together
a strong, effective and interlinking collective force.
For instance, I presented my first attempt at completing the
website so far and many positives were raised as well as improving comments. The
last time I gained feedback regarding the colours of the site and the imagery
used. As my group and I are aware we have our focus group soon and therefore
are working to make our products the best they can be in time for the group. Last
time my website was just at its starting point and lacked accurate photos and
videos, as well as correct text. My group felt the website was too basic and
bright and therefore needed the colours to darken and link with the CD Digipak more, so therefore I listened to
all these suggestions and responses and altered the website. I made progress by
changing the text, imagery after gaining photos from our photoshoot and
altering the colours used. However, I am still working with the template given
that I started with and my options are fairly limited but I will consider this.
Hopefully the focus group will be fond of my website so far, however, I will be pleased to hear issues, problems and concerns they have as this will beneficially help my ancillary product to improve and become better. I feel a focus group is only effective if one receives negative feedback as well as positive. As well as this, I am open to altering and developing it in any way I can.
In order
for our products to be completed, we had to arrange a date to complete a
photoshoot of our main girl, Juli. Fortunately, Juli agreed to the further
shoot four our ancillary products, such as for the CD Digipak and website. Therefore,
Fran and I captured many different shots, both of Juli in the studio and
oppositely of backgrounding images, such as the recording studio, and further suitable
equipment. In addition to this, Fran finalised the images by editing the colour
and re-correcting close detail, using the software Photoshop.
The shoot
went considerably well and everything went according to plan. It was also a
huge benefit as Fran and myself were very effectively as a team. We wanted to
capture images which would constructively and efficiently connected and fitted
with our CD Digipak and website. For instance, we primarily caught the essence
of our main cast member, Juli by placing her in the studio amongst a subtle,
discrete and plain black background. For example, we wanted the background to
be basic and simple and therefore we located a flowing black sheet behind her
to gain a further degree of sensitivity towards our subject and to similarly
allow our main focus, Juli to stand out.
We
intentionally wanted to subtlety play with the style of Juli and therefore
wanted her to be different to her strong and direct image executed in the music
video, however we understood the crucially of allowing our products to flow and
be connected, therefore we constantly reminded ourselves of her connotations
and image, such as youthful, rebellious and aspects of spontaneity. Therefore,
we altered her use of costume, positioning her in black velvet trousers and a
black simple but detailed lace top. We also purposely added a shoe laced choker
and directed her hair to be formed in two douche plaits. We allowed Juli to
maintain her natural domain of beauty and therefore didn’t focus hugely on her
makeup, only adding simplistic dark tones of lipstick and eyeliner. We deliberately
lacked in makeup as we wanted our artist to show her natural and organic act, considering
Negus’ theory.
In addition
to this, we maintained the natural and subtle look by using a soft box as our
main light and a beauty dish where necessary. We also combined the use of a
blue and filter to gain a discrete correction of green to allow our images from
our photoshoot to reflect and link with aspects of our music video.
Similarly,
we also completed a photoshoot without Juli, just capturing the pure core of
useful and suitable equipment, such as gear within the recording studio and appropriate
images of instruments. We purposely captured these further shots to gain extra
features and details and to allow our website to show a range of aspects and
the collectively talented process of our artist. We didn’t use any further equipment
for this shoot, as we wanted to use and embrace the natural light falling on
our subjects.